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Musashi-kun
Level: 25

Are we trying to format as 卵パン said/suggested?:


[Intro]

Instrumental introduction or short sung lines

Introduction to the melody and mood of the song


[Verse 1]

First verses

Introducing the story/theme


[Pre-chorus]

Transition to the chorus

Increasing tension and preparing for the climax


[Chorus]

Main part of the song

most catchy and memorable


[Verse 2]

second verse

continuation/deepening of the story


[Pre-chorus]

Repitition or variation of the first pre-chorus


[Bridge]

variety, musically, lyrically different from the rest of the song

transition to the final chorus


[Chorus]

Repitition of the chorus (can also be with variations)


([Chorus]

I often see also a third chorus in J-Pop songs but it's not necessary)


[Outro]

End of the song instrumentally or with sung lines

Quiet end/final climax

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2 years ago
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ロウ (Row)
Level: 1014

Tbh that's a little complicated for me Although what I wrote mostly follows that basic pattern except the outro is what the bridge would be and then everything after the bridge is skipped. That larger format would be more useful for a song about Kao-chan's story I think

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2 years ago
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Musashi-kun
Level: 25

Ok, so you’re just following a shortened version of that. Personally, I think カオ~~~ should be at the beginning not the end.

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2 years ago
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ロウ (Row)
Level: 1014

Really? I think what I was thinking of with that part was the Yuko Suzuhana song カンパニュラ. Probably depends on what the tune would sound like though

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2 years ago
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Musashi-kun
Level: 25

I agree. That would probably depend on the music.

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2 years ago
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Musashi-kun
Level: 25

If we had instrumental music accompaniment, what instrument(s) do you think it should be?

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2 years ago
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ロウ (Row)
Level: 1014

I honestly have no idea, I wasn't thinking about the musical part at all. I don't play any instruments (and I don't know how to use computer instruments) so it probably depends on what other people know how to use

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2 years ago
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Musashi-kun
Level: 25

Since Kao teaches us Japanese, should the music be Japanese instruments?

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2 years ago
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ロウ (Row)
Level: 1014

That's an interesting idea

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2 years ago
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Musashi-kun
Level: 25

Maybe a taiko base with shamisen and/or koto playing the actual notes.

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2 years ago
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ロウ (Row)
Level: 1014

Hmm, I doubt anyone here knows how to play those instruments, but maybe something like Garage Band has digital sounds of them. Speaking of such instruments, have you ever listened to Wagakki Band? They're my favorite band. Actually Yuko Suzuhana is the main singer of Wagakki Band, but カンパニュラ is solo music of hers.

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2 years ago
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Musashi-kun
Level: 25

I was thinking that we should use prerecorded sounds. I haven’t listened to the Wagakki Band, but I’ll listen later, when I have time.

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2 years ago
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Musashi-kun
Level: 25

Are we making a Kao song album or just a single?

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2 years ago
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ロウ (Row)
Level: 1014

I think we should do multiple songs, since there's no way we could fit everyone's ideas into one song unless it was reallllly long

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2 years ago
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卵パン
Level: 1009

不思議な生き物がいる

カオちゃんと呼ばれてる

どこから来たの?(教えてちょうだい~)

分かんないよ…

どんな物なの?(知りたいな~)

謎なんだ


でも、確実に知てることは


ふわふわで、白くて、丸い

僕らの先生だ


ある日 生き物が

空から落ちてきた

どうして?

分かんない!(ないない)

どうやって?

謎なんだ!(はいはい)


でも、確実に知してることは


親切で、優しくて、賢い

カオちゃん~


今はこのみょうな生き物が

日本語を教えてくれた

僕らの友人だ

知てることは

素晴らしき物

やっぱ謎じゃないよ!


There are so many different ways to translate this…

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2 years ago
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ロウ (Row)
Level: 1014

Ooh, did you add some stuff? I see some extra lines in parentheses

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2 years ago
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卵パン
Level: 1009

Oh yes I added that

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2 years ago
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ロウ (Row)
Level: 1014

What does it say?

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2 years ago
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卵パン
Level: 1009

教えてちょうだい = please tell me, 知りたいな - I wanna know, ないない = no no, はいはい = could be yes yes or just some sounds so it fits to ないない

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2 years ago
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卵パン
Level: 1009

I think your lyrics ideas are already very good. I’m sure we can use some parts of it. But I would change it a bit to make it sound as good as possible. I made a list once what we can include in the lyrics. It’s somewhere in the beginning of this thread.

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2 years ago
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