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your poems are all deep, but mine… well, just read it
The Banana
Yellow and curved
Like a bright moon at dark
His stem had hardened
Like a tough oak tree’s bark
I peeled off his skin
He looked rather nude
I took a bite of him
Which he thought was quite rude
So I said I was sorry
He said it was fine
I said I was hungry
He said I could dine
So I ate up the rest
And he tasted the best
Sometimes I love my past selfOh my word this is so amazing and hilarious Same sometimes I read things I wrote a long time ago and just think where did that me go? 
The stronger the feeling, the harder it is to walk away;
The stronger the bleeding, the harder it is to numb the pain
This feels like someone close to you has left...the bond between them and it is such a hard choice to walk away from them, cuz love blinds one
And when you get hurt by the one you care about the most, the pain just does not reside except it is much harder when we can't imagine that we got hurt due to the person so close to us....
I think it's more like it's the most painful when people you actually care about hurt you
Guys, I recited a poem in my dream 
and I made it up on the fly 
but I could only remember a few words when I woke up and there's no way I can piece it together, but it was so good :kao_cry: I think it was about how fleeting life is or something like that, which sounds really cheesy but it was actually so profound
Aww Mimi, thank you so much 
I think I can picture my brain like a ping pong ball that bounces all over the place 24/7 and hits some cool ideas along the way in all seriousness though, I really appreciate that thank you 
and I made it up on the fly but I could only remember a few words when I woke up and there's no way I can piece it together, but it was so good :kao_cry: I think it was about how fleeting life is or something like that, which sounds really cheesy but it was actually so profound Dreams are not weird they are nostalgic ( sorry if it doesn't make sense )...U should really be a poet
So...after a long time..
Any more poetries done ? 
It's like you read my mind 
I recently wrote another poem for a composition project! The theme is beauty in sorrow
Flowers
To love a rose although it harms
Is beauty in the purest pain
I fell for all your friendly charms,
Yet I would doubtless fall again.
I'm not surprised I care for you
Regardless of the bitter tears--
You were my only stronghold through
The most of all my saddest years.
I know that this is not the end.
In fact, it's beautiful to see
How God can take these broken strands
And weave a brand-new tapestry.
Your loveliness remains with me
Though heartache tints the darkest hours.
When teardrops cloud the things I see,
You still remind me of the flowers.
何？！what a COINCIDENCE..
Nothing ever makes me happy than your rhymes schemes. I think it follows abab scheme right?
My favorite line -> To love a rose although it harms
Love that hurts but still is embraced.
Wow, that’s really good it always amazes me how you can come up with poems that always sound so good it almost sounds like a song
They do feel like song lyrics. All they need is a catchy tune and a guitar.
This song gonna get stuck inside your heeaaddd.
thanks everyone and yeah, I totally agree about the song thing I often have a melody that goes with my poems in my head, and I've even tried writing some songs in the past
To love a rose although it harms
Is beauty in the purest pain
I fell for all your friendly charms,
Yet I would doubtless fall again.
Agayn 
What is this poem about Is the person bad or good
It's about the love that is broken but still embraced
Yeahhh the person abandoned them 
a.k.a. me it's about my old best friend
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