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Hello! Im working on making a webcomic, hopefully releasing the first chapter in March...if I get the motivation to draw 
Ive been planning and drawing the characters for a little over a year, although I think I should give the characters a bit less trauma
The main character (named Raito) is one of the most powerful exorcists in the world, but he's also a single father (his daughter's name is Minako, her personality is based on me since she started out as a Dragon Ball self-insert OC). The story starts with Raito trying to figure out where a missing Exorcist (named Yufina) has gone, but eventually Im gonna pull a 'oh you thought this was a semi-happy story? Nope!' for it
There's also not one, but two doomed Yuri couples in it (one involving Yufina and one involving Raito's childhood friend, Ginga)
Im hopefully going to be drawing at least the cover art tonight 
Ok I got another bit of a story hope you like it;
There is a normal-ish teenage girl her name is Sakura. She's 17 years old in a isekai world. With CRAZY OP skills. Her most used skill is 'Teleport', second 'Shoukan'(summon), third, well, you get the gist of it... Anyway! She lived in a world of magic and the other world is similar in this way but her first world didn't have monsters but this world is on the brink of discruction because of monsters and Sakura is sent into the world to fix it. And there is a LOT of fighting ahead.
Ok, OP Girl P 2 And please say something if you don't like it. I dont think I got a positive answer last time but let's do this.
(The day she dies) "Sakura-sannn!" Says Sakura's only friend, Miku. Sakura says "Ah, Miku-chan. How's the test?" Miku sighs, "I got a D-." Sakura answers "Well, you tried your best, didn't you? Plus in the magic test you got the 5th highest!" "I geuss, But you got first place!" Miku says in a sarcastic tone, kicking a rock into the streem nearby. A truck is speeding, the brakes stop working Miku is crossing, In this world you cant do magic without indecations! "What should I do!" Sakura thinks. She runs and shoves Miku out of the way and gets hit, Blood fling everywhere! And Sakura Dies. But she wakes up leaning on a tree, a big voice says "You're finaly up." Sakura says "What are you and where am I?" The voice answers "You dont seem to remember me? Very well, I am the god of worlds, Caos!" Sakura says "That still doesn't say ANYTHING about where I am." "You are nowhere and yet somewhere." Caos answers, a few minutes later Sakura says "Why dont you show yourself!" Caos comes out of the light, He has Short hair that looks like the the stary night, dark grayish blue eyes with a hint of purple in the corners, and the funny part Sakura had the same eyes. Sakura was confeused. She asks "Why am I here agin?" Caos answers "Ah, yes I did this for some reason let me think...Aha! Yes there is a world a bit like yours, but has monsters and is on the brink of distruction. I want you to save it. What power do you want?" Sakura answers "Any power you say?" He answers "Any power." "Than, I want infenent mana, sommoning, teleportation and whenever I die, I come back to life I come back an hour before I die." Caos answers "Thats all?" "Yep." says Sakura "Than I will acompany you." Says Caos. Sakura says "What?!" Caos says "Welp, we gotta go!"
おめしあがれ!
Once they got into the world Sakura said "Why on earth would you come????!!!!!" Caos answers "You seemed intresting enough, I wanted to see what would happen next." "Ughh, it's like my dad tried to act cool and go to prom with my sister." says Sakura slumping (her sister is dead by the way) he answers "Come on, its not THAT bad!" pointing at the sarving guy with a awful mullet. "Yeah, he needs more help than you do looks wise..." says Sakura looking like this ' ' "Yeah thats BAD." says Caos frowning, "Anyways, the guild is that way.", pointing at the small stall not too faraway from there, and after a few minutes later they reached it. "What, you want food? Sorry but if you're not in the community." Says a grumpy, tired, buff guy. And sakura answers "No, we dont want food or money, we want to register." Caos nods in agreement, with his arms crossed and says "Yep, thats all we wanna do.", than the bulky guy smiles and says "If thats the only thing than fill in these sheets and boom! You're an adveturer!" Once they filled the sheets they were F rank, at the botom of the barrel, and the fun things wont stop now.
I would like someone to draw Caos plz!
Ok I got another bit of a story hope you like it;
There is a normal-ish teenage girl her name is Sakura. She's 17 years old in a isekai world. With CRAZY OP skills. Her most used skill is 'Teleport', second 'Shoukan'(summon), third, well, you get the gist of it... Anyway! She lived in a world of magic and the other world is similar in this way but her first world didn't have monsters but this world is on the brink of discruction because of monsters and Sakura is sent into the world to fix it. And there is a LOT of fighting ahead.
Ok, OP Girl P 2 And please say something if you don't like it. I dont think I got a positive answer last time but let's do this.
(The day she dies) "Sakura-sannn!" Says Sakura's only friend, Miku. Sakura says "Ah, Miku-chan. How's the test?" Miku sighs, "I got a D-." Sakura answers "Well, you tried your best, didn't you? Plus in the magic test you got the 5th highest!" "I geuss, But you got first place!" Miku says in a sarcastic tone, kicking a rock into the streem nearby. A truck is speeding, the brakes stop working Miku is crossing, In this world you cant do magic without indecations! "What should I do!" Sakura thinks. She runs and shoves Miku out of the way and gets hit, Blood fling everywhere! And Sakura Dies. But she wakes up leaning on a tree, a big voice says "You're finaly up." Sakura says "What are you and where am I?" The voice answers "You dont seem to remember me? Very well, I am the god of worlds, Caos!" Sakura says "That still doesn't say ANYTHING about where I am." "You are nowhere and yet somewhere." Caos answers, a few minutes later Sakura says "Why dont you show yourself!" Caos comes out of the light, He has Short hair that looks like the the stary night, dark grayish blue eyes with a hint of purple in the corners, and the funny part Sakura had the same eyes. Sakura was confeused. She asks "Why am I here agin?" Caos answers "Ah, yes I did this for some reason let me think...Aha! Yes there is a world a bit like yours, but has monsters and is on the brink of distruction. I want you to save it. What power do you want?" Sakura answers "Any power you say?" He answers "Any power." "Than, I want infenent mana, sommoning, teleportation and whenever I die, I come back to life I come back an hour before I die." Caos answers "Thats all?" "Yep." says Sakura "Than I will acompany you." Says Caos. Sakura says "What?!" Caos says "Welp, we gotta go!"
おめしあがれ!
Once they got into the world Sakura said "Why on earth would you come????!!!!!" Caos answers "You seemed intresting enough, I wanted to see what would happen next." "Ughh, it's like my dad tried to act cool and go to prom with my sister." says Sakura slumping (her sister is dead by the way) he answers "Come on, its not THAT bad!" pointing at the sarving guy with a awful mullet. "Yeah, he needs more help than you do looks wise..." says Sakura looking like this ' ' "Yeah thats BAD." says Caos frowning, "Anyways, the guild is that way.", pointing at the small stall not too faraway from there, and after a few minutes later they reached it. "What, you want food? Sorry but if you're not in the community." Says a grumpy, tired, buff guy. And sakura answers "No, we dont want food or money, we want to register." Caos nods in agreement, with his arms crossed and says "Yep, thats all we wanna do.", than the bulky guy smiles and says "If thats the only thing than fill in these sheets and boom! You're an adveturer!" Once they filled the sheets they were F rank, at the botom of the barrel, and the fun things wont stop now.
You'd have to go to the "Let's draw each other's OCs" forum, here isn't really the place to ask that 
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